I guess your right, though I still thing that faerie should do as she said and give me a super prize lol

As to the plot, I think they can wrap it up in 4-5 pages. After all all the ixi needs to do is go and speak to jazan, he will see her in his mothers clothing (which obviously worked on his father lol) they fall in love and get married.
Everyone celebrates because his people are freed from the curse, sakhmet goes back to the land of the living and the princess can go back to being a snobby **** on her own, highly relieved that she didnt need to marry him.